Page 1 – Panel 1:
Evan stumbles through the ruined streets of Kraznir, the gravity here clearly affecting him—he's sweating, breathing harder, muscles straining with every step.

Narration (Evan):
“Gravity here’s like a damn anchor. My body’s fast… but not made for this.”

Page 2 – Panel 1:
He walks beneath the shadow of a broken monorail, when suddenly five tall, sleek humanoid-AI hybrids drop from above, surrounding him in a perfect formation—metal glistening under the planet’s dim sun.

Creature 1 (static voice):
“Non-Kraznirian lifeform detected. Capture protocol engaged.”

Page 3 – Full-page spread:
The creatures leap in sync at Evan. He grits his teeth, powers up, and the fight begins—brutal close combat, but Evan’s clearly outmatched in the heavy gravity.

Page 4 – Panels of combat:

• Evan punches one creature, denting its chest—but is immediately flung into a wall by another.
  
  

• He dodges a bladed arm, kicks one down—but is grabbed from behind and smashed to the ground.
  
  

• The ground cracks under him as he's pounded, and he groans—blood running from his mouth.
  
  

Narration (Evan):
“They’ve evolved here. Bred for war. I'm… outmatched.”

Page 5 – Panel 1:
As one of the creatures lifts a blade-like arm to pierce Evan’s chest—

CRASH!
A massive beam of energy sears through the creature’s head, blowing it apart. Then chaos erupts.

Pages 6-7 – Double-page spread (Epic Rebellion League Entrance):
Four alien heroes leap into the fray—each unique, vicious, and fighting like warriors of legend. These are Evan’s future allies:

• Voltfist: Charges in with gauntlets sparking with energy, punches straight through a creature’s core.
  
  

• Mindquake: Levitation with psychic bursts, crushes an enemy’s skull mid-air.
  
  

• Phantomark: Twists shadows into blades, slashes and blinds foes.
  
  

• Aegis: Shields of solid energy block deadly blows, then he shatters an enemy’s spine with a counterstrike.
  
  

• Mirage: Disguised as one of the enemies, shifts form mid-fight and slits a throat in one fluid motion.
  
  

Page 8 – Panel 1:
As the last enemy is torn apart, sirens begin to wail through the city.

Voltfist:
“They’re coming. Reinforcements.”

Mindquake:
“Bring him. No time for questions now.”

They gesture at Evan, and without hesitation, the group runs through hidden alleys into the underground.

Page 9 – Interior: Hideout
The hideout is rugged, hidden in the skeletal remains of a stadium. The group deactivates traps as they enter.

Aegis (sternly):
“Start talking. Who are you? Why are you here?”

Page 10 – Panel 1:
Evan, still catching his breath, looks at them.

Evan:
“My name’s Evan Holt. Earth is under attack. I came here to find help. I need a team… a league of defenders.”
“The galaxy needs you.”

Page 11 – Reaction shots of the group. A heavy silence. Then—

Mirage:
“You picked the right place. This is what we do.”

Voltfist:
“But before we leave this rock... there’s unfinished business.”

Evan (curious):
“What kind of business?”

Page 12 – Final panel (big moment):
Close-up on Phantomark’s glowing eyes.

Phantomark:
“Killing the tyrant who destroyed our world.”

Mindquake (darkly):
“Name’s King Draken.”